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View Poll Results: Do you think I will be able to improve in my Spanish? Not only writing, but speaking?
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Old October 22, 2008, 07:26 PM
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Question Any errors??

1. ¿Vives en una casa o un apartamento? Vivo en una casa.
2. ¿Vives cerca o lejos de la escuela? Vivo cerca de la escuela.
3. ¿Cuántos pisos hay en tu casa? Hay dos pisos en mi casa.
4. ¿Dónde está tu comedor? ¿en el primer piso o el segundo piso? Mi comedor está en el primer piso y cerca de la cocina.
5. ¿Cuántos cuartos hay en tu casa? Hay once cuartos en mi casa.
6. ¿Tienes que hacer la cama todos los días? No tengo que hacer la cama. Mi madre hace mi cama a veces.
7. ¿Te gusta más poner la mesa o quitar la mesa? Me gusta más poner la mesa.
8. ¿Quién lava los platos en tu familia? Mis padres lavan los platos. A veces, yo lavo los platos.
9. ¿En qué cuarto prefieres estudiar? Prefiero estudiar en mi dormitorio.
10. ¿Prefieres sacudir los muebles o pasar la aspiradora? Prefiero pasar la aspiradora.
11. ¿Cómo es tu dormitorio? ¿Grande o pequeño? Mi dormitorio es muy pequeño. Hay dos camas y una ventana. No hay cómoda.
12. ¿Qué quehaceres tienes que hacer antes de una fiesta? Nosotros tenemos que sacudir los muebles y pasar la aspiradora.

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Old October 22, 2008, 07:53 PM
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1. ¿Vives en una casa o un apartamento? Vivo en una casa.
2. ¿Vives cerca o lejos de la escuela? Vivo cerca de la escuela.
3. ¿Cuántos pisos hay en tu casa? Hay dos pisos en mi casa.
4. ¿Dónde está tu comedor? ¿en el primer piso o el segundo piso? Mi comedor en el primer piso y cerca la cocina. The verb is missing.
5. ¿Cuántos cuartos hay en tu casa? Hay once cuartos en mi casa.
6. ¿Tienes que hacer la cama todos los días? No tengo que hace la cama. Mi madre hace mi cama a veces. One of the verbs is wrong.
7. ¿Te gusta más poner la mesa o quitar la mesa? Me gusta más poner la mesa.
8. ¿Quién lava los platos en tu familia? Mis padres lavan los platos. A veces, yo lavo los platos.
9. ¿En qué cuarto prefieres estudiar? Prefiero estudiar en mi dormitorio.
10. ¿Prefieres sacudir los muebles o pasar la aspiradora? Prefiero pasar la aspiradora.
11. ¿Cómo es tu dormitorio? ¿Grande o pequeño? Mi dormitorio es muy pequeño. Hay dos camas y un ventana. No hay cómoda. Check gender in second sentence.
12. ¿Qué quehaceres tienes que hacer antes de una fiesta? Nosotros tenemos que sacudir los muebles y pasar la aspiradora.
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Old October 23, 2008, 06:01 AM
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i fixed all the wrong ones except #6.
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Old October 23, 2008, 07:28 AM
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#4 is still missing the verb.
Do you have a question about #6? Did you find the verb that is wrong?
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Old October 23, 2008, 07:40 AM
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The #4 is pretty straightforward, jchen. Try translating the first part word-by-word to English, and you will realize what's missing in order to make it sound right.

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And I voted "Both" by the way. As long as you're just practicing a bit, you will learn something.
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In the number six you made it up, but in the rest all are well done. Congratulations I have watched to you have get better very much your Spanish wrote, if you continue so as until today, soon you will can to write text longer, and it more exact in own scripture.
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Old October 23, 2008, 01:18 PM
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Number 6 is correct now!
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Now is #6 correct? Should there be "está" in it?
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Yes, #6 is now correct and the missing verb está is now in number 4.
You have corrected everything. 12/12.
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Old October 23, 2008, 01:57 PM
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Good job, jchen!
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