Hello I´m new in the forums

[CrOtALiTo]

Hi, people I´m student of English, and I need somebody with who practice my English writte and speak too, please my msn is spacejamone@walla.com of messenger of hotmail, and also I have this E-mail hdd_regenerator@yahoo.com.mx, perhaps sometime I understood some words, but I try of understanding but, the ill is that I don´t practice with others persons, and if I practice with other persons, I can to learn the fastst possible than my alone, if someby want practice with me only say me and, I add you.

Have a good day.

Regards.

[poli]

Beinvenidos. Hay gente que pueden ayudarte aqui
Welcome. There are people who can help you here.
Entendí lo que escribiste pero hisiste unos errores.
I understood what you wrote but you made some errors.
Let us know if you would like your thread corrected.
Nos avisa si quiere que nosotros corrijamos su hilo.

[CrOtALiTo]

Yes, you can correct my mistakes please.

[Escarabajo]

Creo que Ud. es muy sabio. Tratar aprender el inglés es una idea maravillosa, y si sigue con tanto esfuerzo, va a aprenderlo, se lo juro. Hay errores aquí, pero se entienden porque Ud. no tiene mucha experiencia con mi idioma, y todavía no sabe que existen muchas diferencias de forma, no solo de palabras. También, la ortografía de inglés no tiene ningún systema sensato. Por favor, acuérdese que es novato, y se necesita hacer muchos errores para lograr cualquira gran meta.

Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo

Hi, people I´m a student of English, and I need somebody with whom to practice my English writing and speaking too,please. My msn email address is spacejamone@walla.com of messenger of hotmail, and also I also have an E-mail account at hdd_regenerator@yahoo.com.mx, . Perhaps sometime I understand some words, sometimes, when I try to, understanding but, the problem is that I don't practice with others persons, and. If I practiced with other people, I could to learn as quickly as possible, faster than I can by myself. If somebody wants to practice with me, just tell me, and, I will add you.

Have a good day.

Regards.

[Rusty]

Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo

Hi, people I´m student of English, and I need somebody with who practice my English writte and speak too, please my msn is spacejamone@walla.com of messenger of hotmail, and also I have this E-mail hdd_regenerator@yahoo.com.mx, perhaps sometime I understood some words, but I try of understanding but, the ill is that I don´t practice with others persons, and if I practice with other persons, I can to learn the fastst possible than my alone, if someby want practice with me only say me and, I add you.

Have a good day.

Regards.

¡Bienvenido!

You can practice your English here as much as you want. There are many friendly people here who will try to help you.

I wasn't able to understand everything you wrote, but offer these suggestions:

Hi there,
I'm a student of English, and I need somebody with whom I can practice my English writing, and speaking too, please. My MSN Handle is ..., and my e-mail is ...
() some words, but I try to understand . The trouble is that I don't practice with other people. If I can practice with other people, I can learn much more quickly than on my own. If somebody wants to practice with me, just tell me and I will add you ( as a friend in MSN?).
...

[Rusty]

See, two of us have tried already!

[CrOtALiTo]

Originally Posted by Escarabajo

Creo que Ud. es muy sabio. Tratar aprender el inglés es una idea maravillosa, y si sigue con tanto esfuerzo, va a aprenderlo, se lo juro. Hay errores aquí, pero se entienden porque Ud. no tiene mucha experiencia con mi idioma, y todavía no sabe que existen muchas diferencias de forma, no solo de palabras. También, la ortografía de inglés no tiene ningún systema sensato. Por favor, acuérdese que es novato, y se necesita hacer muchos errores para lograr cualquira gran meta.

Thank you very much, ´cuz there wont be many people as you, that tried of help the persons that the need, learn this languague, but I´ll analize your suggestions for that I have a better scripture.

Good night

[Rusty]

Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo

Thank you very much, ´cuz there wont be many people as you, that tried of help the persons that the need, learn this languague, but I´ll analize your suggestions for that I have a better scripture.

Good night

Thank you very much, 'cuz there aren't many people like you, that try to help the people that need to learn this language, but I´ll analyze your suggestions so that I have better writing (mejor: so that I can write better).

la escritura = writing
la lectura = reading

[CrOtALiTo]

Thank you, I like that you correct me, because so I can to correct to myself, I sometimes think that is difficult the English, I have learned in less of three months, my brother teach me since of january. He be studing the idioms career, he hasn't a lot experience like with English, only with the that they teach his in the school, but I beleave that he has teached me well, now I want to speaking too, but I need help of you, this laguage I like to me, and I feel to can to learn the as quickly as possible, because the I need in my work in my life, I want to meet people of other places, and I talk with them.

I wait that you help, and you corrected help me, I can to learn it the faster than by myself.

[Rusty]

Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo

Thank you, I like that you correct me, because so I can to correct to myself, I sometimes think that is difficult the English, I have learned in less of three months, my brother teach me since of january. He be studing the idioms career, he hasn't a lot experience like with English, only with the that they teach his in the school, but I beleave that he has teached me well, now I want to speaking too, but I need help of you, this laguage I like to me, and I feel to can to learn the as quickly as possible, because the I need in my work in my life, I want to meet people of other places, and I talk with them.

I wait that you help, and you corrected help me, I can to learn it the faster than by myself.

A ver si puedo ayudarte de nuevo. Voy a corregir lo que escribiste de frase en frase.

Thank you, I like that you correct me, because so I can to correct to myself, I sometimes think that is difficult the English, I have learned in less of three months, my brother teach me since of january. He be studing the idioms career, he hasn't a lot experience like with English, only with the that they teach his in the school, but I beleave that he has teached me well, now I want to speaking too, but I need help of you, this laguage I like to me, and I feel to can to learn the as quickly as possible, because the I need in my work in my life, I want to meet people of other places, and I talk with them. I wait that you help, and you corrected help me, I can to learn it the faster than by myself.

Thank you. (You're welcome!) I like that you correct me, because that way I can learn to correct myself. I sometimes think that English is difficult. I have learned it in less than three months. My brother has been teaching me since January. He is studying a career in languages. He hasn't got a lot of experience with English, only that which they teach him in school, but I believe that he has taught me well. Now I want to speak it, too, but I need your help. I like this language, and I feel the need to learn it as quickly as possible, because I need it in order to work in life. I want to meet people from other places, and talk with them. I hope you can help. Your corrections have helped me. I can learn it faster that way than by myself.

Si no entiendes las correcciones, te las puedo explicar.

[Tomisimo]

Welcome to the forums Crotalito, glad to have you around!

[Marcos]

Bienvenidos Crotalito

Where are you from?

[CrOtALiTo]

Hi, Sure you explain to me, some things that you wrote here in that text, so for example:

Hope- esperanza
Got?
which
taught
it in order to

I hope you can help. Your corrections have helped me. I can learn it faster that way than by myself.------I don't understand it, sorry

Las X que significan?



I feel that some corrects, only are ways to speak, but I don't believe that all my text has been all bad.

Creo que son modismos, pero son bienvenidas tus correcciones solo quiere saber, algunas cosas en donde manejor el got, get, comprendo todos los tiempos verbales pero no creo que mi texto completamente este mal?, saludos

[CrOtALiTo]

Hello, Marcos, I'm from Carmen City this place, is in Mexico.

Regasrds.

[CrOtALiTo]

I'm sorry

Creo que son modismos, pero son bienvenidas tus correcciones solo quiero saber, algunas cosas en donde manejo el got, get, comprendo todos los tiempos verbales pero no creo que mi texto este completamente mal?, saludos

[CrOtALiTo]

Hi, My name is Jorge Luis Arjona Pérez
Bord in Carmen City México
I am 24 years old
I have two sons

I´m a Student of English
I like are way to language

[Rusty]

Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo

Hope- esperanza
Got?
which
taught
it in order to

I hope you can help. Your corrections have helped me. I can learn it faster that way than by myself.------I don't understand it, sorry

Las X que significan?

... saludos

Las X marcan las palabras que no deberías usar al traducir una frase del español al inglés. Por ejemplo, 'puedo aprenderlo' se traduce 'I can learn it', no 'I can to learn it'. Por eso, marqué con una X la palabra de sobra. De la misma manera, la palabra 'the' no debe preceder el adverbio 'faster'.

Hope = tener esperanza
El verbo esperar tiene tres sentidos, que, a lo menos, corresponden a tres verbos ingleses (por lo general, no se puede intercambiar esos verbos, porque no tienen el mismo sentido):
Aguardar, se puede traducir 'to wait'. Por ejemplo:
Espera un momento. (Wait a minute.)
Tener esperanza (desear), se traduce 'to hope'. Por ejemplo:
Espero que todos se sientan cómodos. (I hope everyone is comfortable.)
Espero verte. (I hope to see you.) (una esperanza/un deseo)
Suponer (esperar algo), se puede traducir 'to wait for', 'to await' o 'to expect'. Por ejemplo:
Espero la noticia que todo resultara bien. (I'm waiting for the news that everything turned out well. / I'm awaiting the news ... . / I'm expecting the news ... .)
Espero verte. (I expect to see you.) (se supone que va a estar)

Got
La frase 'no tiene' se suele traducir 'doesn't have' o 'hasn't got'. Opté por hasn't got en este caso. Por sí solo, hasn't no está malo, pero no se usa muy a menudo. Por ejemplo:
Ella no tiene pelo rubio. (She doesn't have blond hair. / She hasn't got blond hair.) Nunca vas a oir 'She hasn't blond hair'.
Por otra parte, 'No tiene ni la menor idea' se dice 'She hasn't a clue'. Es un modismo. También suele oir 'She hasn't got a clue' y 'She doesn't have a clue'.

Which
La frase 'sólo con lo que' se dice 'only with that which'; never 'only with the that'. No es necesario repetir la palabra con, y fue por eso que la marqué con X. Pero está bien dicho así.

Taught
Del verbo to teach, es el tiempo indicativo perfecto (simple present perfect tense). To teach viene a ser un verbo irregular. Hay muchos verbos irregulares en inglés. He aquí unos ejemplos de verbos irregulares en tiempo indicativo presente, pretérito, y perfecto:
sing, sang, sung
stink, stank, stunk
sting, stung, stung
see, saw, seen
rise, rose, risen
speak, spoke, spoken
teach, taught, taught

In order to
A fin de / Para
Esta frase se usa cuando quiere decir 'para hacer algo'. Por ejemplo:
Para alcanzar la meta, tiene que esforzarse mucho. (In order to reach the goal, you have to work hard at it.)
La frase que escribiste era 'because the I need in my work in my life'. No tiene sentido 'because the I need'. Supongo que querías decir 'porque lo necesito'. El pronombre lo es un complemento directo (direct object, in English). En inglés, el complemento directo sigue al verbo. Así que, traduje la frase 'because I need it'. En lo que resta, no sé si querías decir 'en mi trabajo, en mi vida' o 'en mi trabajo y en mi vida' o 'en mi trabajo en mi vida'. Lo que escribí (I need it in order to work in life) se puede traducir 'lo necesito para (poder) trabajar en la vida'. Si me equivoqué con el sentido, mis disculpas sinceras. Tengo que adivinar el sentido de algunos frases, porque la traducción directa no sirve.

I can learn it faster that way than by myself
Así
La frase 'that way' (así) se refiere a la frase anterior - 'Your corrections have helped me'. (Las correcciones me han ayudado.) (También puede decir 'Your corrections help me'. (Las correcciones me ayudan.))
No me sonaba bien la frase sin añadir la referencia a aquel idea. Es decir:
'Las correcciones me ayudan. Puedo aprenderlo (el inglés) más rápido así (al verlo corregido) que por mí mismo.'

Espero te ayuden las explicaciones.

Saludos.

[Tomisimo]

Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo

Bord in Carmen City México

You should say: Born in Carmen City...

Originally Posted by Rusty

... marqué con una X la palabra de sobra. De misma manera, la palabra 'the' no debe preceder el adverbio 'faster'.

... marqué con una x la palabra que sobraba. De la misma manera ...

[Rusty]

Gracias, David, por las correcciones. De cierto, está bien dicho la palabra de sobra, pero me gusta más 'te sobra una palabra, marcada con X'.

[Tomisimo]

Está bien Rusty, nada más me sonó mejor "que sobra" que "de sobra", pero esta última forma no creo que esté de plano mal.