ROLE PLAY ·3- complaining again

[ROBINDESBOIS]

ROLE 1. You´re a pirate. You´re tired of travelling at sea. You complain to The Blackbeard pirate. Besides, all your shipmates make fun of you because you love chasing butterflies. You dislike people eating withe their mouth open and use foul language.

ROLE 2. You´re Blackbeard: You´r fed up with everybody complaining. You answer angilly. You can only think of MANDY, a prisonner lady in your ship. You fell in love with her.She complains but you reply with love and care.

ROLE 3- You´re Mandy. You´re the prissoner in a pirate´s ship. You ´re fed upo eith the food, the bed and the shower. You don´t like the pirates. You find them to be very coarse.


Any improvements?

[Rusty]

Originally Posted by ROBINDESBOIS

ROLE 1. You´re a pirate. You´re tired of travelling at sea. You complain to Blackbeard, the pirate. Besides, all your shipmates make fun of you because you love chasing butterflies. You dislike people eating withe their mouth open and using foul language.

ROLE 2. You´re Blackbeard: You´re fed up with everybody complaining. You answer angrily. You can only think of MANDY, a lady prisoner in your ship. You have fallen in love with her. She complains, but you reply with love and care.

ROLE 3- You´re Mandy. You´re the/a prisoner in a pirate´s ship. You´re fed up with the food, the bed and the shower. You don´t like the pirates. You find them to be very coarse.


Any improvements?

Improvements above.

[CrOtALiTo]

What is more correct to say.

Improvement above.

Suggestions above.

Corrections above.

Advances above.

Which ones?

[Rusty]

Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo

Which is more correct to say?
Improvements above.

Suggestions above.

Corrections above.

Advice above.

Which ones?

All are correct. It depends on the situation.
If I'm improving something, I'm providing improvements. (I used improvements because Robin asked if there were any improvements to be made.)
If I'm correcting mistakes, I'm providing corrections.
If I'm suggesting alternate wording, I'm providing suggestions.
If I'm advising (giving advice), I'm providing advice.