Help with text

[Caramelita]

Hello,

I would really appreciate if someone would help me to correct this text I just translated ( need help with the Spanish one)

( English text- I called him right when he was going to the supermarket, I asked him to buy whole wheat pasta instead of the regular pasta, because the whole wheat pasta has more fibre and is more healthy and nutritious. I hope he will remember it because sometimes he's very forgetful)


Le llamé justo cuando estaba yendo al supermercado, le pedí que comprara pasta de trigo integral en vez de pasta regular, poruqe en la pasta de trigo integral hay más fibra y es más saludable y nutritiva. Espero que lo recuerda porque a veces es muy olvidadizo.

[poli]

Originally Posted by Caramelita

Hello,

I would really appreciate if someone would help me to correct this text I just translated ( need help with the Spanish one)

( English text- I called him right when he was going to the supermarket, I asked him to buy whole wheat pasta instead of the regular pasta, because the whole wheat pasta has more fibre and is more healthy and nutritious. I hope he will remember it because sometimes he's very forgetful)


Le llamé justo cuando estaba yendo al supermercado, le pedí que comprara pasta de trigo integral en vez de pasta regular, poruqe en la pasta de trigo integral hay más fibra y es más saludable y nutritiva. Espero que lo recuerda porque a veces es muy olvidadizo.

I think all this is can easily be understood, but some things can be corrected. I'll try but for more definitive answers, wait for native speakers. A least this bill get the ball rolling.
Le llamé cuando iba al supermercado, le pedí que comprara pasta de trigo integral en vez de pasta regular, porque la integral lleva mas fibra, es mas saludable y nutritiva.

[Caramelita]

Originally Posted by poli

I think all this is can easily be understood, but some things can be corrected. I'll try but for more definitive answers, wait for native speakers. A least this bill get the ball rolling.
Le llamé cuando iba al supermercado, le pedí que comprara pasta de trigo integral en vez de pasta regular, porque la integral lleva mas fibra, es mas saludable y nutritiva.

Thank you poli do you think the rest is alright left the way it is??

[AngelicaDeAlquezar]

"Espero que" needs the subjunctive, but you used present indicative.

[Caramelita]

Originally Posted by AngelicaDeAlquezar

"Espero que" needs the subjunctive, but you used present indicative.

Oh! Youre right " espero que lo recuerde" then

[AngelicaDeAlquezar]

Correct now.