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Old April 15, 2010, 06:17 AM
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Mother Earth by Jessica Chen

If we keep polluting
Mother Earth will die
She is dying
From all our pollutants
We need to find a solution
For cleaner air
Cleaner water
Save endangered animals
Stop littering
Mother Earth is dying
Help save her
For she is our Mother Earth
Our home
So please
Reduce, Reuse, and Recycle.
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Old April 15, 2010, 10:22 AM
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It was very nice.

Where did you get that poem?
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Old April 15, 2010, 10:24 AM
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It's a Jessica's poem, she wrote it.

Congratulations, Jessica.
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I wrote it myself. we are doing this First draft thing where you can submit your poems, short stories, drawings etc and it's all due tomorrow. I wanted to do one so I can get extra credit, so this came out of thin air. I just made it up

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gracias and I made a little correction
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Old April 15, 2010, 10:26 AM
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What does "come out of thin air" mean?
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Old April 15, 2010, 10:28 AM
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The idea for my poem came out of nowhere, I just suddenly thought it up

and it pretty much means

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Synonyms: out of nothing, from nowhere
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I wrote it myself. we are doing this First draft thing where you can submit your poems, short stories, drawings etc and it's all due tomorrow. I wanted to do one so I can get extra credit, so this came out of thin air. I just made it up



gracias and I made a little correction
Then Felicidades.

Then congratulation your poem was a great successful.
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Thank you

it's just going to be part of a booklet full of poems and drawings and short stories; it's not really a contest.
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Thanks, Jessica.

You can ask Bob for if he wants to give you one of his drawings.
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ha ha that would be nice but it has to be our own work. If only I was a really good drawer maybe I could also submit a drawing
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Old April 15, 2010, 10:41 AM
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Well, you can try.
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Yes it could be good point, you could to practice more the poems in spoken and written in Spanish, I believe that it could be a great opportunity.
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Well, you can try.
no I am horrible at drawing I don't even know what to draw. I'm better at writing believe me

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Yes it could be good point, you could to practice more the poems in spoken and written in Spanish, I believe that it could be a great opportunity.
oh yes last year there were poems written in different languages, French, and Spanish I think and I'm not sure if there were any more but Spanish was one
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