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Old August 27, 2009, 04:39 PM
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Good point.
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Old August 27, 2009, 08:12 PM
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Sólo son 5 en el caso de ese verso, por razones fonéticas... en general, son 6 al separar al-ma-a-ma-ble.
Claro, y lo que importa para un Haiku son las silabas fonéticas y no las escritas. (en japones casi siempre se corresponden, por eso es más facil en ese sentido)

Yo no lo sabía eso, me lo dijo un amigo que entiende mucho del tema. No es nada facil ni para nativos darse cuenta de las silabas habladas sino tenes practica.

PD: todos los haikus que se me ocurren tienen diferentes silabas escritas que habladas..
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sweet rose, lovely rose
why do you represent love?
roses always die

The roses are more pretty if are like you, it was the sweet poem in my hart, but the my hard is not compared with your beautifil eyes.


Just it was a thinking.
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Old August 28, 2009, 07:04 AM
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sweet rose, lovely rose
why do you represent love?
roses always die
como la rosa
el amor nace, crece,
desaparece.

El diamante
es aburrido, soso
aunque eterno

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Old August 28, 2009, 10:51 AM
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@ookami: Estoy de acuerdo en que los recursos retóricos (y más en la poesía) son prácticamente infinitos, pero considerando que muchos de los usuarios del foro son estudiantes de español, había que hacer la aclaración sobre las sílabas, para evitar confusiones.
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Old August 28, 2009, 03:26 PM
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one, two, three, four, five
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Can hearts be broken
that never really healed well
in the second place?

Your lips and hands cold,
Did I just imagine this-
No...you kissed and told..

Magic mirrors may
make me fear,frown, flee, fly-
cry a crooked day

Bag of bones, stripped of
flesh and flaw, fear and fright might
atone my heart's plight.
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En esta noche
la rica empanada -----------> de jamón y quezo
me acompaña.
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En esta noche
la rica empanada -----------> de jamón y quezo
me acompaña.
¡Qué bien!
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Old September 13, 2009, 05:25 PM
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Can hearts be broken
that never really healed well
in the second place?

Your lips and hands cold,
Did I just imagine this-
No...you kissed and told..

Magic mirrors may
make me fear,frown, flee, fly-
cry a crooked day

Bag of bones, stripped of
flesh and flaw, fear and fright might
atone my heart's plight.


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Old October 11, 2009, 03:49 PM
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Five syllables here.
Then, seven syllables here.
Finish with five more.
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Old October 13, 2009, 03:35 PM
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In a cold april night
behind the mountain
the flames have started.
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'Time is a sort of river of passing events, and strong is its current; no sooner is a thing brought to sight than it is swept by and another takes its place, and this too will be swept away.' M.A.
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Good one
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the flames have started
northern lights are shimmering
unseen force at play!
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Old October 18, 2009, 03:50 PM
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^ that's a good one too
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Five syllables here.
Then, seven syllables here.
Finish with five more.
Ya tengo la oportunidad de usar una nueva palabra, gracias a Chileno...

¡Qué ocurrente, Jessica!
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Old October 23, 2009, 10:52 AM
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Old October 24, 2009, 12:10 AM
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Your haiku is very clever, Jessica
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