My practice

[CrOtALiTo]

I will write a little story about my home, if you find mistakes, then please you can correct them.


I appreciate your help.


The story of my home.

My home has two beds in the room, also my house has a room living and a dinning room, as every home my home has a garage where I can parked my truck 4 x 4, as you know, I have a Gran Cherokee Laredo, because I like much the trucks above all the 4 x4 trucks, my house has a backward and there are much nature as the trees and flowers that my wife care daily, and commonly my house there are much sun light, during the nights my house has a kitchen where my wife cook everyday, sometimes I invite to my family to eats to a restaurant, for instance the Porton restaurant, there are food very delicious and well, I like much go there, when I arrive to my home, I give to thank to god for other day lived with my family, and later I turn to sleep, because the other day, I have to go to work, my job is about computers everyday I attended much users, afterwards again I'm going to my home, I arrive to wearing me and putting me the tennis, because I'm going to go to do exercise with my brother, basically my method is to give fifteen turns around of a park, where the people play Football, later I ask to my bother that he take me to my home to come back, afterward, I take a dinner with my family or only I take a shower and we together get up in the truck and we get out to the street to do only scrolls, in the weekend I'm going to the meeting with my friends of the club 4 x 4 for planning the trip to the next day, and it happen on Saturday, and it is very fun to me, the next day Sunday, normally my family and me let's go to the cinema, because as I told you before, I love so much the movies, and well, we staying a little time in the square watching the clothes and between other things, when the day is to end, well we commonly turn to go to dinner to some restaurant.


I hope this practice has not much mistakes.

Thanks.

[Rusty]

Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo

I will write a little story about my home. If you find mistakes, then please you can correct them.

I appreciate your help.

The story of my home.

My home has two bedrooms. My house also has a living room and a dining room. As every home, my home has a garage where I can parked my 4 x 4 truck. As you know, I have a Grand Cherokee Laredo, because I like the trucks a lot, above all, the 4 x 4 trucks. My house has a backyard and there are a lot of trees and flowers that my wife cares for daily. Normally my house gets a lot of sunlight. during the nights My house has a kitchen where my wife cooks everyday. Sometimes I invite to my family to eats at a restaurant, for instance, the Porton Restaurant. They have very delicious food and well, I like to go there a lot. When I arrive to my home, I give to thanks to God for another day lived with my family, and later I go to sleep, because the next day I have to go to work, My job is about computers. Everyday I help many users. Afterwards, I head home again. When I get home, I put on my tennis shoes, because I'm going to go to do exercise with my brother. Basically, my routine is to walk fifteen times around the park where the people play soccer. Later, I ask to my bother to take me to my home. to come back, Afterward, I have dinner with my family or I just take a shower and we all get up in the truck and we go for a ride. This weekend I'm going to the 4 x 4 Club meeting with my friends to planning the trip for the next day, which happens on Saturday, and it is very fun for me. The next day, Sunday, my family and I normally let's go to the movies, because, as I've told you before, I really love the movies. We (also) spend a little time in the square looking at the clothes, among other things. When the day has ended, well we normally go to dinner at a restaurant.

I hope this practice doesn't have many mistakes.

Thanks.

Corrections above.

[CrOtALiTo]

I will write it again, because when I was writing the text was in the night and well, I was tired and my concentration was very good, as normally is during in the morning.

Rusty please when I write again other text please, you could to write two parts the text original mine and your text, because of that way I can compare both text easier than now.

[bobjenkins]

Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo

I will write it again, because when I was writing the text was in the night and well, I was tired and my concentration was very good, as normally is during in the morning.

Rusty please when I write again other text please, you could to write two parts the text original mine and your text, because of that way I can compare both text easier than now.

Yo trataré de ayudarte tambien cuando tú lo escribe de nuevo (again)

[CrOtALiTo]

The practice of today is about my job.

Look, as I told you before about my life daily, now I want to share with you my life in the office.

This only a practice of my English that I need if you can correcting me.


Everyday I start my day in the office to the eight to morning very early the users start to report much issues with their computers, and well, I have to attend them with their issues, for example each day, I have to attend around to five reports or more, normally the issues of the equipments are about the problems with the e-mails in their computer, configurations in the outlook or also they have problems with their printers inside of the company, and well as every company has issues with the virus, also is my case, always there will have computers infect with virus that afterwards I have to format in all case.


The users have to do a report with helpdesk on Argentine, and the IT support has send me a e-mail with the issue of the computers in the company, so I have the evidence of the reports that there are daily and commonly I have of six and ten reports per day.


It's alot to me, because I'm the unit person in the department who fix the computers, in the company there are around to one hundred twenty two person working in the company with the computer and it's alot people that I have to attend daily, when the day is for finished the people still continue phone me to the cellular thing that I don't like much, because I'm in my house and the people even wants to be attend.

Time before I have to attend others places apart of my three bases where are the people, I have to attend the base to Villahermosa Tabasco, and it's very tired to me, already that I have to do a trip to three hours for arrive to the other base located in other city.

Well, sometimes I feel that my job already is very bored to me, because daily I do the same like that others IT in the Mexican Republic.


It's everything that I have to tell you for the moment.


I appreciate your help anyhow.

[bobjenkins]

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{|}The practice of today is about my job.

Look, as I told you before about my daily life , now I want to share with you my life in the office.

This only a practice of my English that I need if you can correcting me.


(Everyday) I start my day in the office to the at eight to in the morning. Very early the users start to report many issues with their computers, and well, I have to attend to them with their issues. For example each day, I have to attend around to five reports or more (five or more reports), normally the issues of the equipments are about the problems with the e-mails in their computers, configurations in the outlook or also they have problems with their printers inside of the company. As every company has issues with the viruses, also is my case, there will always be computers infected with/by viruses that (afterwards) I have to reformat in all case.


The users have to do a report with helpdesk in Argentina, and the IT support has to send me an ("a" with the following word starting with a vowel becomes "an") e-mail with the issue of the computers in the company, so I have the evidence of the reports that there are. Daily and commonly I have of six to ten reports per day. (Quizás puede formular nuevamente esa oración) **On a common day I have six to ten reports (to finish)


It's alot to/for me, because I'm the unit person in the department who fixes the computers. In the company there are around to one hundred twenty two people working in the company with the computers, there are alot people (that) I have to attend daily, when the day is for finished the people still continue to phone me on the cellular phone/cell phone, (that) I don't like/enjoy much, because I'm in my house and the people still wants to be helped.

Time before I have to attend others places apart of my three bases/offices where there are the people, I have to attend the base/office in Villahermosa Tabasco, and it's very exausting for me. Already that I have to do a three hour long trip to three hours for arrive to the other base/office located in another city.

Well, sometimes I feel that my job already is very boring/dull to me, because daily I do the same thing as the other IT's in the Mexican Republic.

Después de trabajar luego voy a jeepear. Es lo que añado


It's everything that I have to tell you for the moment.


I appreciate your help anyhow.|The practice of today is about my job.

Look, as I told you before about my life daily, now I want to share with you my life in the office.

This only a practice of my English that I need if you can correcting me.


Everyday I start my day in the office to the eight to morning very early the users start to report much issues with their computers, and well, I have to attend them with their issues, for example each day, I have to attend around to five reports or more, normally the issues of the equipments are about the problems with the e-mails in their computer, configurations in the outlook or also they have problems with their printers inside of the company, and well as every company has issues with the virus, also is my case, always there will have computers infect with virus that afterwards I have to format in all case.


The users have to do a report with helpdesk on Argentine, and the IT support has send me a e-mail with the issue of the computers in the company, so I have the evidence of the reports that there are daily and commonly I have of six and ten reports per day.


It's alot to me, because I'm the unit person in the department who fix the computers, in the company there are around to one hundred twenty two person working in the company with the computer and it's alot people that I have to attend daily, when the day is for finished the people still continue phone me to the cellular thing that I don't like much, because I'm in my house and the people even wants to be attend.

Time before I have to attend others places apart of my three bases where are the people, I have to attend the base to Villahermosa Tabasco, and it's very tired to me, already that I have to do a trip to three hours for arrive to the other base located in other city.

Well, sometimes I feel that my job already is very bored to me, because daily I do the same like that others IT in the Mexican Republic.




It's everything that I have to tell you for the moment.


I appreciate your help anyhow.
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[CrOtALiTo]

Well done.


I like the of Jeepear to the end of the day.

I didn't understand this part.

Please if you could to explain me it again.

Thank you.

[bobjenkins]

Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo

Well done.


I like the of Jeepear to the end of the day.

I didn't understand this part.

Please if you could to explain me it again.

Thank you.

La parte de la jeepear solamente añadí, o hablas de una otra parte?

[CrOtALiTo]

No I speak just of the part when you tell me that I must to go jeepear.


Thank very much for your help.

[CrOtALiTo]

Other practice.

Sometimes I'm dull due to my job, because sometimes I haven't any report and well if I have a whole week without to do anything then it turn to does some dull for me, but when the people decides to have many issues with their computers then, the job start to does more hard for me, sometimes I get out very later of my job, because the people more the line's manager needs support with their computers and well, I can't say NOT, therefore, sometimes, I get out at ten or eleven of the night, and it in my city is very dangerous, because there are a lot of people mat in this city. Every Tuesday at Thursday in the company we have a meeting about the safe of our work, it beginning at 8 A.M, sometimes that meeting turn some dull during the talk of the safe, but as every company has it own method to teaching with it's employed. Something else in my company there are much a lo of rusty in the backward because there are people working with iron and as you know the iron tend to rusted with the time and it provoke a kind to allergy in my body for the dust, already that my office is in the part to aback of the company close of the iron rusted.


I hope this text is better written than other one.

[Rusty]

Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo

Another practice.
I hope this text is written better than the other one.

[CrOtALiTo]

I have other practice now.

I will have to format five equipments in my work, because they just are infected with the viruses that have damage the Windows XP, if you are IT then you will know that the format computers is very bored sometimes, but I have to do it. Since my work is very important inside of the company, I have to format around two or more computer each day. Also I have to attend to the users with others problems in their computer as I told you in my previous post, for instance I have to fix ten computers during the day that they have networking issues, and they have to be ready before of the finish week, as you can read it is a lot work for an only person, therefore, sometimes I don't grasp to attend to all users, and they get upset with me, because they think that I can't attend them and it lie.

For the moment I only will write that short text.

[Tomisimo]

Empecé unas correcciones.

[CrOtALiTo]

Thank you David. I will try of don't overuse the word THE.

And also I will try to use the ING.