Las vacaciones del invierno

[Jessica]

Only the fourth sentence is correctly written.
The first sentence contains an unconjugated verb. Perhaps you were thinking about putting in a 'simple future tense'. The fifth sentence also contains an unconjugated verb and the object pronouns you've used do not belong there.
The second sentence contains a word that is misspelled. The third sentence has a reflexive verb where it shouldn't be used.

In an earlier post you asked about skiing. There's a much more popular way to say it than the one you chose. Did you get your wording from your teacher or textbook?


okay. I will look at those sentences.
I got the wording from my textbook. We learned it (but not the future tense)

[Jessica]

I have to turn in my journal next Tuesday! O.O any suggestions what I should write? should I just make it up?

[Rusty]

As I've already stated, use your own words (words you have learned). Make it up if you wish. If you fix the errors in the five sentences you posted, that is a good journal entry. By the way, you do know the 'simple future' I mentioned (voy a pasar la aspiradora), so you can talk about present and future events just fine in your journal.

Have fun!

[Jessica]

okay :) thanks

[CrOtALiTo]

Ok, She, then.

[Jessica]

Después de hacer todas las quehaceres, vamos a descansar. Mi hermano minor voy a jugar en la computadora. Mi hermano mejor voy a leer un libro favorito. Mi mamá y papá voy a duermen.

Find errors, por favor. Gracias.

[Rusty]

Después de hacer todas las quehaceres, vamos a descansar. Mi hermano minor voy a jugar en la computadora. Mi hermano mejor voy a leer un libro favorito. Mi mamá y papá voy a duermen.

The structure of the simple future is ir a + infinitive. You need to conjugate ir according to the subject, like you did in the first sentence.

younger = menor
older = mayor

[Jessica]

oh ok. I will correct them.

[Jessica]

Can you believe it? I got an 8/10 just because I wrote si tenemos tiempo! Sra. said I have to use words we learned. I know what si tenemos tiempo means! :sad:
it ruins everything I used to have a perfect in Homework now I don't!!!!! :sad:

[CrOtALiTo]

Yes, I understand her, because she as your teacher must teaching you the words only the words that she has taught you, you must use, because if you give her a homework almost perfect then, she won't believe, you did your homework alone.


She is teacher is normal her attitude toward you.

[Jessica]

She thought I used an online translator! I didn't! I know what si tenemos tiempo means!!