Las vacaciones del invierno

[Jessica]

for the December journal I have to write about las vacaciones del invierno.
I don't know how to begin, and it's due on the 23rd. I want to finish it as soon as I can.

I'm going to try to begin it. I will write it in English and then attempt to translate it into Spanish.

1) a. During winter vacation, we are going to get a new kitchen. My mom already bought a new oven and a new microwave.

b. Durante las vacaciones del invierno, nosotros vamos a obtener una nueva cocina. Mi mamá ya compró una nuevo estufa y un nuevo horno de microondas.

more details to come....

[Tomisimo]

Durante las vacaciones del invierno, nosotros vamos a obtener una nueva cocina. Mi mamá ya compró una nuevo estufa y un nuevo horno de microondas.


The Spanish looks quite grammatical (except what I've highlighted in red). Good job! :)

[Jessica]

okay :)
Edited/Revised:
Durante las vacaciones del invierno, nosotros vamos a obtener una nuevo cocina. Mi mamá ya compró una nuevo estufa y un nuevo horno de microondas.

[Tomisimo]

What I highlighted in red is what was wrong, not what was right.

[Jessica]

I know that. I changed it.

[lee ying]

Durante las vacaciones del invierno, nosotros vamos a obtener una nuevo cocina. Mi mamá ya compró una nuevo estufa y un nuevo horno de microondas. tambien me la voy a pasar junto a mi familia en disfutando del agradable frio. En estas vacaciones de invierno vamos a disfrutar la navidad toda mi familia , primero vamos a donar mi casa con mi pino y con muchas luzes, el 25 vamos a degustarnos de una comida deliciosa que prepara mi mama disfrutaremois a lo grande esta navidada festejaremos con los vecinos tambien.
tambien voy a pasear con mis compañeros o vecinos , tambien quizas muy pronto tomaremos una largas vacaciones con mi familia fuera de esta ciudad tan hermosa.
aprovechare a estudiar mas español para mejorarlo por supuesto mirare mi programa favorito con mis hermanos este programa se llama "jeopardy" .
no descartare que me abrigare muy bien para protegerme del frio invierno y me enferme.

well, i gave my opinion but i don´t know if it´s right.
well, read it, if you don´t understand me,ask away!

[Rusty]

I know that. I changed it.
Jessica, you had one error (David highlighted it in hopes that you would figure out how to make it right) and then you introduced another. Now you have two errors to correct. :)

I suggest you ask lots of questions about what Lee Ying wrote. He provided several ideas for your story (but I hope you do you own homework and not just copy his ideas). :)

[Jessica]

I'm confused :P

[Rusty]

Do you not know what the original error was? The single vowel that was highlighted by David was incorrect. Then you made the same error in another place.

[CrOtALiTo]

for the December journal I have to write about las vacaciones del invierno.
I don't know how to begin, and it's due on the 23rd. I want to finish it as soon as I can.

I'm going to try to begin it. I will write it in English and then attempt to translate it into Spanish.

1) a. During winter vacation, we are going to get a new kitchen. My mom already bought a new oven and a new microwave.

b. Durante las vacaciones del invierno, nosotros vamos a obtener una nueva cocina. Mi mamá ya compró una nuevo estufa y un nuevo horno de microondas.

more details to come....


My attempt.

Durante mis vacaciones estamos a punto de recibir una cocina nueva, y tambien mi mama ya ha comprado un horno nuevo, y tambien un microondas nuevo.


It's was my attempt, I hope my translate cans help you, if you have doubts or questions above that, please let me know, and with glad, I will can help you more.

[Jessica]

so one of the errors is "nuevo"....I STILL don't understand! Is it supposed to be nueva or nuevo???
We have to use words we learned in the journal. I'm using estufa as oven, not horno, since we learned oven as horno.

[CrOtALiTo]

Yes, Jchen, you are right, oven mean Horno, or Estufa, you are well, in my previous translate, I never use the word Nuevo, but you can use the word Nuevo.


I will be traveling today, I'm going to Villahermosa Tabasco, tonight I will enter to my dear website TOMISIMO.

Take care much my friends.

[Jessica]

Villahermosa Tabasco? where is that?

[Rusty]

so one of the errors is "nuevo"....I STILL don't understand! Is it supposed to be nueva or nuevo???
We have to use words we learned in the journal. I'm using estufa as oven, not horno, since we learned oven as horno.

Nuevo is an adjective. Adjectives agree in gender and number with the noun they modify. Have a look at your sentence and see if that adjective is correct in each case. :)

[Jessica]

Durante las vacaciones del invierno, nosotros vamos a obtener una nueva cocina. Mi mamá ya compró una nueva estufa y un nuevo horno de microondas

Any mistakes now?

[Rusty]

Good job. :thumbsup: Put a period at the end of the second sentence and you're good to go.

[Jessica]

oh oops forgot a period! okay thanks :)
I can't believe I actually didn't see those errors :P

[Rusty]

You're welcome. Sometimes it takes more than your own set of eyes to see something.

[CrOtALiTo]

Jchen, I'm surprise with your job, the you have made well all your sentence, please you keep it up studying Spanish.

[Jessica]

thanks :) I will keep studying Spanish....you keep it up with your English :) I have to figure out now what to write next.