Hi,

I've noticed that you're trying to write in Spanish elsewhere.

It may help you to know that a lot of the article (if not all of it) that you've posted here in the forums has already been translated here. The translator of the article I linked to uses phrases that are commonly used here and there, so I just copied where I could. If you're trying not to plagiarize, you can change wording now and again, always remembering your audience.
Also, remember to use the impersonal 'se' much more. Avoid using the progressive tenses unless you really mean 'in the very act of'.

Instead of trying to translate everything yourself, why haven't you hired a professional translation firm to do it for you?
Just curious.

Rusty