 CrOtALiTo
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No punctuation is a problem I see. The first examples can be found in your "logo" area, beginning with 'Servicios de desarollo ...'. A capitalized word is good, but not without prior punctuation. I recommend placing a bullet between the services. When you're listing employees, use line breaks (the names run together).
There are English words on your main page (the tabs for 'Special', 'Accesories and office furniture', and 'Printer supplies'). 'Special' should be 'Specials'. 'Accessories' is misspelled. 'Office' and 'Furniture' should be capitalized. 'Supplies' should be capitalized. Why are these tabs written in English, anyway?
Hay faltas de ortografía (like 'sipnosis', which should be 'sinopsis').
Spelling errors and clumsy formatting can drive away potential customers, so it might be a good idea to have someone proofread your content.
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Sorry, I looked at your website awhile back. It looks pretty good, as far as the background image and the content that "floats" above it as you scroll.
None of the images for the products you're trying to sell are available. A square with a red X appears instead.
About Me
- About CrOtALiTo
- Biography
- Enjoying the life with my language
- Location
- Mérida, Yucatán
- Interests
- Music, Telecoms, Server, Movies
- Occupation
- SIS México's owner
- Gender
- Male / Masculino
- Native Language
- I can understand Spanish and English
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- We are building the most important dare for my life and my family feature now we are installing new services in telecoms.
- We are building the most important dare for my life and my family feature now we are installing new services in telecoms.
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- http://www.sis-mexico.org.mx
- This Page
- https://forums.tomisimo.org/member.php?u=2439
