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Old May 07, 2013, 03:16 AM
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Hello,

Can somebody please have a look on these texts and let me know if I have any mistakes?


1.El invierno pasado me caí de las escalares y me torcí la pierna. Tuve que pasar cuatro semanas en el hospital.

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Visito a mi abuela todos los veranos. En el pueblo, en el que vive ella, hay sólo pocos residentes. La mayoría de las casas están vacías, porque mucha gente se mudó a la ciudad.

3. Anita y yo nos sentamos en una cafetería media hora y durante todo este tiempo habló de su nuevo novio. “Es muy rico”, decía Anita, pero yo sabía que no era cierto.

4. El doctor me ordenó que dejara de tomar café.
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Old May 07, 2013, 03:06 PM
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Hello,

Can somebody please have a look on these texts and let me know if I have any mistakes?


1.El invierno pasado me caí de las escalares y me torcí la pierna. Tuve que pasar cuatro semanas en el hospital.

2.
Visito a mi abuela todos los veranos. En el pueblo, en el que vive ella, hay sólo pocos residentes. La mayoría de las casas están vacías, porque mucha gente se mudó a la ciudad.

3. Anita y yo nos sentamos en una cafetería media hora y durante todo este tiempo habló de su nuevo novio. “Es muy rico”, decía Anita, pero yo sabía que no era cierto.

4. El doctor me ordenó que dejara de tomar café.
Just minimal points to fix...
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Old May 07, 2013, 03:31 PM
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The escaleras was a typo

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Old May 07, 2013, 03:53 PM
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Right, and the commas for 2. were not needed. Well done.
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