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Old April 27, 2013, 03:40 PM
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Corríjanme por favor si tengo algunos errores


Cerca de la casa había un lago grande, en el cual los niños nadaban todos los veranos. Si el agua estaba demasiado fría su madre les prohibía entrar al agua. Tenía miedo de que se enfermarían si nadaban en agua fría.
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Hola,

Corríjanme por favor si tengo algunos errores


Cerca de la casa había un lago grande, en el cual los niños nadaban todos los veranos. Si el agua estaba demasiado fría su madre les prohibía entrar al agua. Tenía miedo de que se enfermarían (I'd suggest past in subjunctive here) si nadaban en agua fría.
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Tenía miedo de que se enfermaran si nadaban... would that be good?
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