Writing a pen pal letter: Please help!

[YBM10]

Hello all,

I am learning Spanish and to help me do so I have starting writing emails to a friend of mine in Spain. Could you please let me know if this sentence is correct:

Espero que estés bien y yo realmente deseando ver la próxima Pascua.

I trying to essentially say - I hope you're doing well and I really look forward to seeing you next easter.

Does this make sense? I'd really love someone's opinion!

Thanks so much

[AngelicaDeAlquezar]

Very good job! Here are some hints for improvement:

Originally Posted by YBM10

Espero que estés bien y yo realmente deseando (Try using a conjugated verb) ver*** (We need a personal pronoun to know whom/what you want to see) *** (A preposition would make your sentence clearer) la próxima Pascua.