Some short translations

[ookami]

Well, I pointed out in red some HUGE translation doubts I had. But there are many things that I'm sure are wrong or, at less, that lack accuracy. So I would really like to know your opinion about this.
Thanks in advance and I hope this is not to large.

1)
Cold in hand blues

y qué es lo que vas a decir voy a decir solamente algo y qué es lo que vas a hacer voy a ocultarme en el lenguaje y porqué tengo miedo

and what's what you're going to say I'm just going to say something and what's what you're going to do I'm going to hide on the language and why? I'm afraid

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2)
Linterna sorda
Los ausentes soplan y la noche es densa. La noche tiene el color de los párpados del muerto.
Toda la noche hago la noche. Toda la noche escribo. Palabra por palabra yo escribo la noche.

Deaf lantern
The absents blow and the night is weighty. The night has the colour of [the] dead's eyelid.
All night I make the night. All night I write. Word by word I write the night.

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3)

Vértigos o contemplación de algo que termina Esta lila se deshoja. Desde si misma cae y oculta su antigua sombra. He de morir de cosas así.

Vértigos or contemplation of something that ends This lilac SE DESHOJA. From herself she falls and hide her old shadow. I ought to die from things like this.

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4)

Los ojos abiertos Alguien mide sollozando la extensión del alba. Alguien apuñala la almohada en busca de su imposible lugar de reposo.

The open eyes Someone measure while sobbing the extent of the dawn. Someone stab the pillow on the search of his impossible /searching for his impossible place of rest.

[hermit]

Part 1:

"What is it that you're going to say?"

"What is it that you're going to do?"

"I'm going to hide in the language."
(In English, perhaps a word other
than "hide", like "take refuge in"
or "lose myself in" or "immerse
myself in".

[ookami]

Thanks hermit, much clearer now. I couldn't came up with another way of saying "hide".