Escribe un mensaje y La forma de la palabra

[ChicadeJeep]

Buenos días,

Hace alguin por favor haga correcciones a mi mensaje?

As I complete more exercises, I will just add them to this message.

Thank you! Muchas gracias!

Primero:

Buenos Días Jory,
Mi familia es mudanza a Nanaimo. Nosotros (o somos?) quiere estamos cerca de nuestro amigos y golf todo el año. No tengo cambiar escuela como yo escuela en mi casa. Estoy emocionado ver tú.

Segundo:

Buenas tardes Mona,

¿Hace te gusta ir a un juego de fútbol? ¡Es tú favorito equipo! Ellos son jugando mi favorito equipo, tan nosotros hace tenemos(?) un bien tiempo. Responda lo antes posible por favor. Nos vemos.

Tercero:

Hola Agnes,

Este verano, voy a Toronto con mi esposo ver le Hockey Hall of Fame. Nosotros entusiasmamos sobre le Stanley Cup. Porque nosotros sea cerca de tú casa, ¿hace sus gustan tienen cena con nosotros?
¡Hasta pronto!

[irmamar]

Originally Posted by ChicadeJeep

Buenos días,

Hace alguin por favor haga correcciones a mi mensaje?

As I complete more exercises, I will just add them to this message.

Thank you! Muchas gracias!

Buenos Días Jory,
Mi familia es mudanza a Nanaimo. Nosotros (o somos?) quiere estamos cerca de nuestro amigos y golf todo el año. No tengo cambiar escuela como yo escuela en mi casa. Estoy emocionado ver tú.

Buenos días, Jory:

Mi familia se muda a Nanaimo. Nosostros queremos estar cerca de nuestros amigos y (?) del golf todo el año. No tengo que cambiar de escuela, ¿porque tengo la escuela en mi casa? Estoy emocionado de verte (mejor: estoy muy contento de verte, me alegra verte)

Segundo:

Buenas tardes Mona,

¿Hace te gusta ir a un juego de fútbol? ¡Es tú favorito equipo! Ellos son jugando mi favorito equipo, tan nosotros hace tenemos(?) un bien tiempo. Responda lo antes posible por favor. Nos vemos.

Buenas tardes, Mona:

¿Te gustaría ir a ver un partido de fútbol? ¡Juega tu equipo favorito! ¿Los que están jugando son mi equipo favorito -y aquí ya no entiendo nada-? ¿Hace buen tiempo o algo así? Responde (o mejor: contéstame) lo antes posible, por favor. Nos vemos.

Please, don't be angry with me because the things I'm going to tell you, but this is a complete disaster (I'm not sure about this word). I'd say "no tiene ni pies ni cabeza" in Spanish. I have invented half of the sentences I've written. I think that you could use a methodology, starting with short sentences, learning some words. Step by step you'll go far, because I'm sure you're not learning anything for my corrections. Small corrections are more effective than bigger ones (or that's what I think).

Try again with short and simple sentences. That will be easier and you'll learn sooner.

And forgive me if I've been rude, I didn't mean it

[ChicadeJeep]

Eeeeek!!

Oh no, I thought I did so good! My final written is tomorrow!
Looks like I will be working on this stuff all night again.

Thank you irmamar - you have not been rude at all, very helpful.
I cannot learn unless I am told what I've done wrong, right?!

[CrOtALiTo]

I can suggesting you that you write in notepaper your words less common used for you, and later you try to do exercises with your notes, and well later you try memorize them with your post and between other things.

I saw your text and well just I took me a little to time for understand the text, and well just I found some mistakes but the mistakes are very diminutive but there are mistakes in the Spanish, so as I know that in this post mine there are mistakes now.

[Rusty]

tan nosotros hace tenemos un bien tiempo

I recommend you also provide the English translations so we won't have to guess what you're trying to say. I suppose the underlying English for the phrase above was: so we'll have a good time (but I've no idea what to do with the word hace)

This is said: así que nos divertiremos mucho
or: así que lo pasaremos bien

The phrase 'to have a good time' is an idiomatic expression. The translations I gave are idiomatic equivalents.
divertirse mucho = to have a good time
pasarlo bien = to have a good time

así que = so, when used as a coordinating conjunction
You can't use the adverb tan in place of a coordination conjunction.

[ChicadeJeep]

Originally Posted by Rusty

I recommend you also provide the English translations so we won't have to guess what you're trying to say. I suppose the underlying English for the phrase above was: so we'll have a good time (but I've no idea what to do with the word hace)

This is said: así que nos divertiremos mucho
or: así que lo pasaremos bien

The phrase 'to have a good time' is an idiomatic expression. The translations I gave are idiomatic equivalents.
divertirse mucho = to have a good time
pasarlo bien = to have a good time

así que = so, when used as a coordinating conjunction
You can't use the adverb tan in place of a coordination conjunction.

Thanks Rusty, I will put the English equivalent of what I am trying to say in the future. Yes, I was translating literally "so we would have a good time".

Oh goodness, I don't think I will do very well tomorrow. It's my last chance or I'm out! Eeek!

[irmamar]

Good luck, Jeep

[ChicadeJeep]

Thanks irmamar!

[hermit]

hi chicadejeep - what is most obvious, and perhaps most important,
in a way, is the effort you're making.

wishing you the best of results on your make-up exam. are there any
more basic courses available to you?

hermit

[ChicadeJeep]

Originally Posted by hermit

hi chicadejeep - what is most obvious, and perhaps most important,
in a way, is the effort you're making.

wishing you the best of results on your make-up exam. are there any
more basic courses available to you?

hermit

Thank you hermit.
My exam was moved to this morning as my Jeep decided not to start - my husband spent 5 hours fixing it.
I'm off fairly soon.
Thanks very much!
Unfortunately, this is the most basic course I am taking!! The beginner's course.