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#1
October 30, 2015, 10:15 AM
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Sentence translation
Does this make sense?
'No obstante, posiblemente unas de las cosas más importantes están la arquitectura y la historia, ambas de las cuales merecen una visita de su propia'. 
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#2
October 30, 2015, 10:59 AM
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It sounds the mushy thing you get using an on-line translator.
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#3
October 30, 2015, 01:01 PM
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Oh dear! Is there a way of reworking it then?
Thanks for the feedback. What I intended to say (in English) was: 'However, possibly some of the most important things are the architecture and the history, both of which deserve a visit of their own'. Last edited by AngelicaDeAlquezar; October 30, 2015 at 03:21 PM. Reason: Merged back-to-back posts
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October 30, 2015, 02:21 PM
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Start for fixing the "are the architecture and the history" bit, as they are not places so "estar" is the wrong verb there.
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#5
October 31, 2015, 05:33 AM
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Is están the only thing I need to fix?
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October 31, 2015, 08:30 AM
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Besides that, 'de su propia' needs fixed.
Then there's the question, "Is this something a native speaker would say?" We don't usually use 'visit' with 'architecture' or 'history'. Try using the verbs 'look at' and 'review'.
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#7
October 31, 2015, 09:12 AM
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How's this for a reworking?
'No obstante, posiblemente unas de las cosas más importantes son la arquitectura y la historia que ambas merecen un viaje a pesar de los atractivos cautivodores.
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