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Old October 31, 2010, 01:53 PM
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Please, check this sentence

I'm not sure if the syntax is correct:

The Parliamentarians under Cromwell ended the war in August with a victory over the Scots (the Battle of Preston).
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Old October 31, 2010, 01:56 PM
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Old October 31, 2010, 02:07 PM
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I wasn't sure where placing 'in August'. But if you tell me that it is correct, it must be. Thanks a lot.
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Old October 31, 2010, 02:37 PM
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I wasn't sure of where to place 'in August'. But if you tell me that it is correct, it must be. Thanks a lot.
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Old October 31, 2010, 03:27 PM
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Escrito originalmente por irmamar
I wasn't sure ofwhere to place 'in August'. But if you tell me that it is correct, it must be. Thanks a lot.
Además, yo pondría "(in the Battle of Preston)". No puedo explicar por qué.
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Old October 31, 2010, 04:28 PM
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Yeah - what they said. The sentence in your original question is great.
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Old October 31, 2010, 09:36 PM
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Looks just fine. As for pj's correction of chileno's sentence, I think that saying "sure of" is fine, though just saying sure works as well.
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Maybe it's a dialectal variation. I'm not sure what my internalised rule is, but I suspect it's

sure of + NOUN PHRASE
sure + VERB PHRASE

E.g.
I'm sure of it.
I'm not completely sure of his trustworthiness.
I'm sure he'll do it.
I'm not sure when I can come.
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Old November 01, 2010, 02:45 AM
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Maybe it's a dialectal variation. I'm not sure what my internalised rule is, but I suspect it's

sure of + NOUN PHRASE
sure + VERB PHRASE

E.g.
I'm sure of it.
I'm not completely sure of his trustworthiness.
I'm sure he'll do it.
I'm not sure when I can come.
If it's a dialectical variation, then it's my dialect as well.
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Old November 01, 2010, 06:29 AM
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The question was about the first sentence . But thanks for the help with the second.
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Old November 08, 2010, 09:56 AM
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We sure learned something from it!
By the way, if you want to practice and learn, the film on Cromwell is rather edifying. (I saw it more than 20 years ago, but I think Perikles would approve it...)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cromwell_%28film%29
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Old November 08, 2010, 12:50 PM
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Thanks for the link. Although I don't know when I'll have enough time to watch the film and/or if I'll find it.
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Maybe it's a dialectal variation. I'm not sure what my internalised rule is, but I suspect it's

sure of + NOUN PHRASE
sure + VERB PHRASE

E.g.
I'm sure of it.
I'm not completely sure of his trustworthiness.
I'm sure he'll do it.
I'm not sure when I can come.
Agreed.
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Old November 09, 2010, 09:58 PM
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Thanks for the link. Although I don't know when I'll have enough time to watch the film and/or if I'll find it.
Well... at least you can see the pictures and see how the worked to make sure the characters were pretty close to the original guys... I mean, lords and commoners...
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Old November 10, 2010, 03:13 AM
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Thank you, Pablín.
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Old November 11, 2010, 01:11 PM
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You're welcome Irmamarina...!
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Old November 11, 2010, 01:22 PM
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A beautiful name.
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