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Old December 29, 2015, 02:09 AM
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Alrededor de 15 % de la población estadounidense – o 30 millones de personas – habla la lengua castellana, y los hispanos, ya sean inmigrantes naturalizados o de primera, segunda o tercera generación, son cada año más activos en la política, la economía, los movimientos sociales de base, la cultura pop y las artes. También es una población muy joven, con una edad media de 27 años y cuyo pleno potencial todavía tiene que desarollarse en el futuro. En comparación, la edad mediana del americano “blanco” (de ascendencia anglosajona) es de 42 años.

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las artes = the visual and performing arts or the art subjects (humanities)

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con una edad mediana de 27 ...
... la edad mediana ... es de 42 ...

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las artes = the visual and performing arts or the art subjects (humanities)

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