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Old August 15, 2014, 02:13 PM
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A really short essay

Hi, I decided to write a quick essay regarding a (fictional) footballer.. I've just started learning Spanish these couple of weeks and I wanted to know if I'm making some progress. It's going to be really short, so don't mind

Andrew Harvey (nacido en Marruecos, 10 de junio de 1996) es un futbolista marroqui que juega como portero en el Blackburn Rovers de la maxima categoria de futbol en Inglaterra. Ha sido jugador internacional con la seleccion marroqui juvenil desde 2013.

Andrew nacio en Safi, una ciudad cerca de Casablanca, el urbano mas gran de su pais. El comienzo de su carrera fue en Olympic Safi, de la cual fue su capitan. En 2013, el firmo por Blackburn Rovers, por dos temporadas.

Es conocido por su grande disciplina. Posee un buen reflejo.

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Old August 15, 2014, 03:47 PM
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Very well done!!!


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Andrew Harvey (nacido en Marruecos, 10 de junio de 1996) es un futbolista marroquí que juega como portero en el Blackburn Rovers de la máxima categoría de fútbol en Inglaterra. Ha sido jugador internacional con la selección marroquí juvenil desde 2013.

Andrew nació en Safi, una ciudad cercana a Casablanca, la urbe más grande de su país. El comienzo de su carrera fue en Olympic Safi, del cual [equipo] fue su capitán. En 2013, (él) firmó con Blackburn Rovers, durante/para jugar dos temporadas.

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Thanks.. I knew about the accentuation but my keyboard doesn't provide Spanish letters.

Do you think I'm making progress, Julve?

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Of course! ("¡Por supuestísimo!" as we'd say around here...). You're using complex sentences and verb conjugation.

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Thanks.. I knew about the accentuation but my keyboard doesn't provide Spanish letters.

Do you think I'm making progress, Julve?

The message edit box provides the Accents dropdown list to enter accented letters and some other special characters.

If you are using your own computer to access this site, you may be able to configure your computer so that you can type the special characters directly. This thread describes some possibilities.
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Old August 16, 2014, 05:16 AM
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Gracias a todos!
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