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Old August 26, 2009, 06:36 AM
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Old August 26, 2009, 07:34 AM
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Tiny little babe
Delightful bundle of joy
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Old August 26, 2009, 07:35 AM
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Hola crotalito,

Not sure what you mean here sorry?

I know you can't translate a poem into another language.. That is not what I did or attempted to do here?

Obviously my Spanish isn't good enough to write a good haiku anyway that's ok because like bob I am just experimenting. If Spanish natives have corrections or ideas on how something could be improved this is welcome as per always, bearing in mind that poetry does give license to exercise some 'poetic freedom'..
Yes, look I'm trying to telling you that if you try to translate a poem in another language, it possible that the hang of the same poem is loosen when you have finished the translation.

I hope you can understand me this time.


Sincerely yours.
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Tiny little babe
Delightful bundle of joy
Nestled in her arms.
I love it, because i have a little baby
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Old August 26, 2009, 07:37 AM
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Yes, look I'm telling you, if you try to translate a poem into of another language is possible that the hang of the same poem be loosen.

I hope you can understand me this time.
Not really, I'm afraid..

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Tiny little babe
Delightful bundle of joy
Nestled in her arms.
Beautiful poem!!
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Old August 26, 2009, 07:43 AM
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Thanks, guys.
I understand what you mean, Sosia. I love babies. My youngest is 5 already, but he's still adorable.
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Old August 26, 2009, 12:57 PM
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Real haikus have five
Then seven syllables, right?
Yes, then five again.
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Not really, I'm afraid..



Beautiful poem!!
What's.
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I love it, because i have a little baby
Do you've a kid?
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En el cielo
Para siempre feliz
Nunca descender

Una pregunta, ¿cuántas sílabas? -> El alma amable
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Old August 27, 2009, 01:51 AM
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El al maa ma ble
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El al maa ma ble
5
Muchas gracias! Necesito a hablar como eso Es difícil para combinar las sílabas al hablar
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Sólo son 5 en el caso de ese verso, por razones fonéticas... en general, son 6 al separar al-ma-a-ma-ble.
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Sólo son 5 en el caso de ese verso, por razones fonéticas... en general, son 6 al separar al-ma-a-ma-ble.
Ahh gracias por la explicación/ elaboración Angelica! ¡Estuvo exactamente lo que me pregunté!
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Old August 27, 2009, 02:19 PM
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Yellow daffodil
Swinging in the humid breeze
Part of England is
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Old August 27, 2009, 02:45 PM
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Vergeet me niet je
te herinneren aan mijn
laatbloeiende liefde

Don't forget to help me
remind you of my
lateblosseming love

'vergeetmenietje' is a flower, 'forgetmenot'


A bridging of brave
souls meet, hearts beat on
a vintage-blue wave


Stealing a sweet kiss
The grass seems greener in a
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Old August 27, 2009, 02:46 PM
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sweet rose, lovely rose
why do you represent love?
roses always die
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Old August 27, 2009, 04:33 PM
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So you don't believe in eternal love, JChen?
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Old August 27, 2009, 04:38 PM
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I do, but I'm talking about roses; why does a rose represent love when a rose always dies?
 
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