People Steal

[CrOtALiTo]

Hello.

I want express a point of view, last night a muggers steal me, they opened my truck and subtracted my laptop that it was on my truck, I think somewhat, Do why people has that steal us.?

Last night, they gave me, my father´s day stealing me, my laptop.

[María José]

Sorry about your laptop.

[Rusty]

Buena cosa que no te hicieran ningún daño los ladrones. Eso sí sería algo muy malo.
It's a good thing that the thieves didn't hurt you. That would be a very bad thing.

[Tomisimo]

It's sad when people think they have to steal. If they put all the energy that they use to steal into some productive endeavor I think they could accomplish a lot.

[CrOtALiTo]

Yeah, Such is the life on my country, nothing is secure, sometimes I have thought that the happen is something that never it will change, the people killing to other people, the families are not secures when they get out to take a walk, 'cause always the person will be preoccupied in the insecurity on the streeps. at least is my point of view personal.

I have gotten my father's day.

I hope you all are well.

Have a good day.

[Alfonso]

Here it goes my attempt:

Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo

Yeah, such is () life in my country, nothing is safe. Sometimes I have thought this fact will never () change, () people killing () other people, () families are not safe when they get out to take a walk, 'cause always the person will be worried about insecurity on the streets. At least, this is my personal point of view.

I have celebrated my father's day.

I hope you all are well.

Have a good day.

[Rusty]

Great job, Alfonso. The only thing I would correct is
'cause they will always be worried about unsafe streets.

The adverb always needs to be near the verb.

[Tomisimo]

Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo

Yeah, Such is the life on in my country, nothing is secure, sometimes I have thought that the happen is something that never it will change, the people killing to other people, the families are not secures when they get out to take a walk, 'cause always the person will they will always be preoccupied in the insecurity on the streeps streets. At least that is my personal point of view personal.

Yes, violence and crime is unfortunate. What part of Mexico are you from? I have traveled to many parts of Mexico and I haven't felt particularly insecure.

Sí, desgraciadamente hay violencia y crimen. ¿De qué parte de México eres? He viajado en muchas partes de México y no me he sentido muy inseguro.

EDIT: Good job Alfonso y Rusty. I was messing around with the editor buttons, and it took me a long time to submit my reply and you beat me to it

[CrOtALiTo]

Yeah, thanks, for your corrections.

[CrOtALiTo]

I'm from Carmen, City, inside of the campeche state, I'm near cancun Mexico as around of ten hours of distance.

Regards.